Surgeon – Chapter Twenty-Nine

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Chapter Twenty-Nine

6:00 PM; CLINSTONE, ANDREW BATES’S HOUSE, DRIVEWAY

“Six o’clock is still a terrible time to do this,” Bo said. “Gordon is already here.”

“We’ve got guns for a reason, Austen,” Carter said.

“Well, you two do. I’ve just got my wits, and I’m not sure how far that’ll get me,” Bo said.

“You’re welcome to sit in the cruiser. I’d prefer it,” Jacob said, hitting his palm against the bottom of his Glock’s magazine.

“I’m not going to do that. I’m just expressing that… walking into a home while the killer is there is stupid. That’s all.”

“Just stay behind us, Bo. We’ve got you covered,” Jacob promised, meeting Bo’s gaze in the rearview mirror.

“Okay, but if you let me die in there, I’ll haunt you. Forever.”

Jacob snorted. “Deal. Let’s roll.” He pushed open his door and stepped out into the snow. He shut the door, holding his Glock in front of himself, aimed at the ground. After Carter was outside, Bo slid out of the cruiser with a sigh. He followed Jacob and Carter to the front of the house. Jacob leaned back against the house and nodded to Carter, pulling back on the slide of his gun. Carter reached out and grabbed the doorknob. He pushed the door open and leaned away from the door as Jacob went inside, gun raised.

Carter followed, quickly followed by Bo. What the hell am I supposed to do with my hands? They’ve got guns. They know what to do with their hands. Bo looked down at his feet as he heard a sound beneath them. It was quiet, barely there, but it was there. Gordon was in the basement. Carter opened a door. Bathroom. Jacob opened a door. Bedroom.

Bo cleared his throat. Jacob whirled around to face him. Bo gestured to the door on his right.

“Open it,” Jacob whispered. Bo gave a thumbs-up before pulling open the door. Jacob headed down the stairs, followed by Carter. Bo frowned. Gordon would hear them. Neither one of them was exactly light on their feet. Still, Bo followed, one hand brushing against the railing.

“Gordon Bates, you’re under arrest. Place your hands on the back of your head,” Jacob said as soon as he reached the bottom of the stairs.

“Lower your weapons, or I’ll shoot her,” Gordon said. Bo peeked around the edge of the wall, his gaze landing on Gordon. He had a pistol pressed to Natalie’s temple. Her face, bruised and swollen from the reconstruction surgery done only a few days before.

“Mister Bates—”

“I’ll shoot her,” Gordon emphasized, digging the muzzle further into Natalie’s temple. She whimpered.

Bo slipped behind Jacob, easily snagging his cuffs from his belt, until Bo was directly in Gordon’s line of sight. “Put your gun away, Jake.”

Jacob shot a glare in Bo’s direction. “Get your ass behind me. What the fuck are you doing?”

Jake. Put your goddamn gun away,” Bo hissed.

Gordon pointed the gun at Bo, the only one of the three men that wasn’t wearing a bulletproof vest. That… was admittedly an oversight Bo would file away for next time. “Listen to blondie, over here,” he said. Jake held up both hands before shoving his Glock back into its holster. Carter followed suit.

“Good. Now we can talk,” Bo said. He shoved his hands into his pockets. Jupiter, that felt unnatural. “Gordon, I know this is hard for you. Losing Brooke once was bad enough, right? Your father would be broken if he lost his little girl all over again. And your mother? He’d be devastated.”

“What’re you trying to pull?” Gordon asked.

“You just don’t want to see your father like that. He’s all you have left, right? Besides your wife and your little girls, of course. But you don’t want to lose your father the way you lost your mom.” Bo took a small step forward, so small Gordon didn’t notice it. “You don’t want to lose him the way you lost your sister. You love him too much.”

“You don’t know what you’re talking about,” Gordon said.

“You only help your father because he’s all you have. You love him. He’s everything to you, so you agreed to help him. You agreed to bring Mom and little sis back to life. You agreed to help with the surgeries, to help find the parts.” Bo took another step forward.

No one is being brought back to life. They’re alive. They’re fine,” Gordon said.

“I know, I know. I’m sorry. I misspoke. You’re just fixing them back up, is all,” Bo said, taking another step. “You’re just making them look the way they used to. That’s all you two want. You just want the whole family back again, that’s all.”

“Shut up,” Gordon whispered.

“I’m on your side, Gordon,” Bo said, stepping closer. “There is nothing wrong with what you’re doing.”

“Y–you are? You’re on my side?” Gordon asked.

“Of course I am. They teach us to do anything for family, right?” Bo asked. He stepped forward. “That’s all this is. You’re doing everything you can for your family. Mom, Dad, Brooke. You just want them all to be okay again. There’s nothing wrong with that. I’m on your side.”

“I just want us to be happy,” Gordon whispered. “He was so broken. I-I just need him to be okay.”

“I know you do. That’s normal. Anyone who loves their family just wants every member to be happy, to be okay,” Bo said. “Can I have the gun, Gordon?”

Gordon held his pistol out. Bo closed the distance between them and took it in his left hand. Bo lifted his right hand to the gun, leaving Jacob’s handcuffs in his pocket. He released the magazine into his hand, shoved it into his pocket. He pulled back on the slide, watching a bullet fall to the concrete floor of the basement. Clearing his throat, he shoved the pistol into his waistband, beneath his coat. Even through his shirt, the metal was cold against his back.

Bo shoved his hands back into his pockets. “See, now we can have a calm discussion about all of this,” he said. “You don’t really want to do this, do you, Gordon? It was Dad’s idea, and you agreed because you love him, right?”

Gordon’s eyes shifted to Jacob and Carter before he looked back at Bo, nodding. “I just want to help people keep their animals healthy,” he whispered.

“And you don’t want to go to jail, do you?” Bo asked. Gordon shook his head, his arm loosening around Natalie’s shoulders and chest. “You don’t want to hurt her, do you?”

“No,” Gordon murmured.

“I didn’t think so. How about you let her go?” Bo asked. Gordon released her. Natalie collapsed against Bo, wrapping her fists around the collar of his shirt. Bo wrapped his left arm around her. In one swift motion, he pulled the cuffs from his pocket and clasped one around Gordon’s wrist.

Jacob’s eyes widened as he patted his belt for his cuffs. “Son of a bitch,” he whispered.

“I’m sorry,” Bo said quietly. “Turn around, please?”

Tears welled in Gordon’s eyes as he turned toward the wall. Bo clasped the cuff around Gordon’s other wrist before wrapping his right arm around Natalie, burying his fingers in her hair as she sobbed against him.

Jacob crossed the room quickly, wrapping a hand around Gordon’s upper arm. “We are going to have a very serious talk when we get back to the station,” he said through his teeth, his gaze focusing on Bo’s face.

“Sure thing, Detective,” Bo said. His eyes followed Jacob for a moment before he sighed. “Natalie, sweetheart? I’m going to pass you off to Detective Lehmann so I can get Miss Marshall out of there. Is that okay?” Natalie nodded. Carter wrapped an arm around her shoulders as she moved away from Bo.

Cleo’s hands were wrapped around the bars of her cell, her watery eyes focused on Bo. “Thank you,” she whispered, holding a hand out through the door.

Bo squeezed her hand as he squatted down in front of the door. “You’re very welcome, Miss Marshall.” He pulled his lock-picking kit from his back pocket. “I’m going to let go of your hand and get you out of this place, okay?” he asked. Cleo only nodded, releasing his hand. Bo smiled softly as he set to work on picking the lock. “You’re going home, Miss Marshall. You’re going home.”


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Surgeon – Chapter Twenty-Eight

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Chapter Twenty-Eight

Thursday: January 16, 2020

4:20 AM; CLINSTONE, BO AUSTEN’S HOUSE, BEDROOM

Bo opened his eyes as Acamas attempted to shove her nose up his. Gently, he swatted her away. “Why the hell do you do that, huh, baby?” he asked. Acamas let out a purr, kneading her paws against the fabric of his shirt. “You’ve got issues, Acky, serious issues.” He lifted her off his chest and got out of bed. There was no way he’d be getting any more sleep anyway. The second go-round at the nightmare of the horses from the Thanatos case stomping him to death while Kathy laughed had been good enough for him.

He flipped on the bedside lamp and headed for the bathroom. He turned on the light and kicked the door shut. As he turned on the water in the sink, he heard one of Acamas’s toys slide across the tiled bathroom floor. Acamas, who enjoyed hard plastic toys meant for human toddlers rather than cats, also enjoyed launching them under doors at Bo’s feet. Chuckling, he kicked the toy back under the door.

Bo leaned down and washed his face with cold water. The toy hit his heel. After shutting off the water, Bo kicked the toy back in Acamas’s direction. She shoved a paw under the door, curling it around the toy and pulling it back toward herself. Bo pulled the hand towel from its hook and lightly patted his face dry. He heard his phone ding in his bedroom.

He opened the door, stepping over Acamas as he walked into his room. He swiped his phone from the nightstand and smiled to himself. The program on his laptop had found a match. He walked out of his bedroom, Acamas following at his heels. In the kitchen, he leaned over the table and opened the lid of his laptop. He quickly typed in his password. As soon as the screen unlocked, he scanned the information on his laptop.

“Holy shit,” he breathed. He fucking had it.

7:00 AM; CLINSTONE POLICE DEPARTMENT, LAB

Bo didn’t lift his gaze from his laptop as the door to the lab opened. “Detective Lehmann,” he greeted.

“You know it’s me without even looking?” Carter asked.

“You put more weight on one foot than you do the other. The sound’s incredibly distinguishable when compared to Jake, and he’s about the only other person who would come down to visit,” Bo said. Finally, he looked up at Carter. “What can I do for you, Detective?”

Carter cleared his throat as he crossed the room. “I, uh, brought you coffee.” He set the cup down in front of Bo. “It’s the same thing Jake orders for you. It’s a, umm, peace treaty, I guess you could call it. I’d like to start over. I’ve been a royal dick, and I’m sorry. You didn’t deserve that. It’s just…” Carter sighed. “When I met Jake, he was helping Alice get this guy out of prison, and nearly every case we worked during that time dealt with this other man, our previous Lieutenant, Connor Anderson. I spent my whole time believing that Jake didn’t know what he was talking about, that Connor was innocent, that he wasn’t a bad man. I was wrong, and I didn’t want to make that mistake again with you, but if you were guilty of something, you definitely would’ve killed me or Gwen already for what we did. So I’m sorry.”

Bo nodded once and held out a hand. “I’m Bo Austen, forensic analyst. You are?”

Carter smiled faintly as he grabbed Bo’s hand. “Detective Carter Lehmann, Jake’s partner.”

“Well, it’s great to meet you, Detective,” Bo said softly, dropping his hand back to the table. “Thank you for the coffee.”

“You’re welcome, and… thank you for ‘starting over’,” Carter said.

Bo nodded once. “My pleasure, Detective.” He offered a faint smile. “I’m not the bad guy, here. I try to be as level-headed as I possibly can. No true grudges, no out of place anger. I may not be like you, but it doesn’t mean that I don’t understand you.” He shrugged. “I would’ve been suspicious of me too. I’m a little odd, in case you haven’t noticed, and it’s something I’m well-aware of. It takes a while to look past that and realize that I’m intelligent for reasons other than being a mastermind killer,”

“Lehmann, what’re you doing in here?” Jacob asked as he walked into the lab.

“It’s okay. He’s apologizing,” Bo said.

“Do you actually mean it this time?” Jacob asked.

Carter nodded as his partner moved to stand beside him. “I do. I promise, Jake, I’m done with the bullshit.”

“Awesome. Looks like you can be back on the case,” Jacob said. “You know, now that we all can be friends like mature adults.”

“I’m glad we’re all being mature,” Bo said. “But with that out of the way, my program got a hit this morning.”

“Oh, sweet.” Jacob rounded the table to stand beside Bo. “What is it?”

Clearing his throat, Bo brought up a news article. “I’ll save you the boring task of actually reading through the whole thing. Lauren Bates, mother of two, was driving late at night. She rounded a curb at about ninety miles an hour and rolled the car. She and her daughter, who was in the passenger seat, died. It was labeled as a suicide. Lauren had been depressed for nearly a year and had attempted suicide before the fatal incident.

“This was in 2017. The daughter, Brooke, was thirteen. Lauren was forty-two. The husband and son, Andrew and Gordon Bates, were left grief-stricken, obviously. Lauren and Brooke had a funeral and a burial, and Andrew and Gordon were out of work for almost two weeks.

“Brooke Bates was born on February fifteenth, 2004. Natalie Lambert was born on February eleventh, 2004. Lauren Bates was born on November seventh, 1975. Cleo Marshall was born on November 2, 1975. Andrew Bates is chief of surgery at Walker-Bates Memorial Hospital here in town. He has a scar on his thumb from a rogue patient who attacked him. Gordon Bates is a veterinarian at the place here in town, as well. You want two prime suspects without flaw? I’ve got them for you, and my system’s already voice ID’d them both to the nine-one-one calls. They killed, they called in, and they got themselves caught because they were stupid enough to call the cops to make sure the victims were found.”

“Bo Austen, take a fucking bow. Jesus Christ, you are amazing,” Jacob said. One corner of Bo’s mouth lifted. “I’m gonna talk to Leu and put in for a warrant. Austen, you’re amazing, honest to God. Thank you, you little genius. Thank you. You’re amazing.”

“Thank you, Jake,” Bo said quietly. With a wide smile, Jacob offered a two-finger salute to Bo before walking out of the lab.

“Can I ask you something?” Carter questioned.

“Yes.”

“Why do you hate taking credit for your accomplishments?” Carter said. “What you just did? That’s amazing, and you’re acting like it’s nothing special.”

Bo lifted his shoulders. “When it came to solving the biggest case in my entire career, I couldn’t do it. Everything I’ve done since then has been… mediocre, at best,” he said softly. “I don’t take credit for mediocre.”


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Surgeon – Chapter Twenty-Seven

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Chapter Twenty-Seven

3:23 PM; CLINSTONE, HANNAH FROST’S APARTMENT, BEDROOM

“She’s only been dead for about half an hour,” Bo said. “Lips removed, but no mark on her arm. No blood was drawn.”

“Why not? I mean, why forgo that?” Jacob asked.

Bo shrugged, squatting down for a side angle of Hannah Frost’s face. “Well, you know, I haven’t done the autopsy on Rose Anderson yet. It’s possibly they took three pints from her, which would’ve given them two extra pints of blood so that they didn’t have to waste time getting any from Hannah Frost.”

“A time saver? Why does that matter now?” Jacob asked.

“His lunch break, I assume. Two o’clock to three o’clock, give or take a few.”

“So he’s at work, killing people on his break?”

“Why not?” Bo asked. “He goes to work, kills a couple girls on break, and returns to work like nothing happened. It’s a shady alibi, but it is an alibi, because who in their right mind would kill people during their lunch break?”

“That’s a… fair point,” Jacob said quietly.

“Mmhmm.” Bo sighed, pulling off one of his gloves. He scratched the side of his head before passing his fingers through his hair. “Well, let’s get her back to the morgue so I can start the autopsies, see what we can see.”

6:05 PM; MINNESOTA, THE SURGEON’S HOUSE, OFFICE

“Do you work tomorrow?”

Gordon nodded as he lowered himself into the chair in front of his father’s desk. “Mmhmm, seven to three.”

He sighed. “I’m pulling double tomorrow. Six AM to ten PM.”

“When will we work on Brooke?” Gordon asked.

He cleared his throat, running a hand through his brown hair. “Around eleven tomorrow night, if that works for you?”

“Yeah, I’ll… I’ll just tell Mish that there was an emergency at work or something,” Gordon said. “I’ll be here around ten-thirty, then. I’ll get her ready for surgery so she’s good to go when you get home.”

He smiled, his blue eyes softening ever so slightly. “Good. Thank you.”

“Sure, Dad. Anything to make Mom and Brooke whole again.”

His hand moved to the small vial of blood he wore around his neck, attached to a delicate, silver chain. His wife’s blood. Back in the day, it had been her idea. She had been wearing his blood the same way the day she died.

One of these days, Cleo Marshall would wear one around her neck too, and she would be complete.

6:30 PM; CLINSTONE, BO AUSTEN’S HOUSE, KITCHEN

Inviting the Mason family over to his house for supper had been odd for Bo, but he and Jacob hadn’t wanted to stop working on the case. Katie Mason, who was allergic to cats, had been on allergy shots for the last year and was finding that she enjoyed Acamas’s company slightly more than the small dog they had at home.

“What’s ‘N10 SK-slash-S’?” Jacob asked, his eyes skimming the sticky note at the top of the page in Bo’s notebook reserved for Rose Anderson.

“Number ten surgical knife-slash-scalpel.”

“Got it.” Jacob cleared his throat, flipping to the next page. “Okay, so Rose was missing three pints, and Hannah wasn’t missing any?”

“Right. Except the normal blood loss from the lips removal,” Bo said. He scratched at his hairline, clearing his throat. “Or… whatever you would consider ‘normal’ for that.”

“Right. Now what?” Jacob asked.

“I’m going to digitally add the features to Natalie’s face, smooth it all out, and compare it to the faces in the system. We find out who Natalie’s supposed to be, we find out all the possible people that would feel a need to recreate it,” Bo said.

“You can do that?” Jacob said, setting Bo’s notebook on the counter. “Actually, never mind. Why am I even surprised?”

Bo chuckled. “Good question.”

“Daddy?” Katie asked from her seat at the table.

“Yeah, baby?” Jacob asked.

“What’s two twenty-one minus one forty-six?” Katie asked.

Jacob snorted. “Baby, I haven’t done math without a calculator since—”

“Seventy-five,” Bo said. “It’s seventy-five.”

“Oh, yeah. I forgot you were a calculator too,” Jacob said. Bo only chuckled.

Katie frowned. “I keep getting one eighty-five,” she said quietly.

“Stir this?” Bo asked, holding a spoon out to Jacob.

“Gladly.”

Bo walked over to Katie, pressing a hand to the table as he leaned over her shoulder. “Oh, here you go. When you turn the one into an eleven, you have to turn this two into a one. You left it as a two and turned it into twelve,” he said. “You just aren’t carrying it over. Otherwise, you got it down great, kiddo.”

Oh. Our teacher just writes the instructions on the boards, and I… don’t follow written directions too well,” Katie said quietly.

“Dyslexia,” Jacob said from the stove.

Bo smiled faintly. “Well, keep it up, Katie. You’re doing great.” He gave her shoulder a squeeze. “Good job, kiddo.”

8:07 PM; CLINSTONE, BO AUSTEN’S HOUSE, LIVING ROOM

“You’re really good with kids,” Jacob said.

Bo shrugged, his gaze focused on his laptop screen as he worked to soften Natalie Lambert’s features. “Dallas had kids,” he said offhandedly.

“And?”

“And… I helped sometimes. I always helped the oldest with his homework.”

“Do you ever want kids, Bo?” Alice asked, a sleeping Elijah cradled in her arms. Katie, sitting in the arm chair with her earphones in, was holding Charlotte.

“I’ve, uh, never thought about it, no.” That wasn’t quite true. In a fertility center somewhere in California, Bridget Decker’s fertilized eggs sat in a freezer, waiting for at least one of them to decide they wanted kids. At the time, when Bridget had needed chemotherapy, he hadn’t even considered saying ‘no’ an option, and saying ‘yes’ hadn’t even been a question. But they had been young, and Bo hadn’t been beaten down by Jamal Pitman, Kathy Baker, and the country-wide manhunt for his best friend-turned-serial-killer.

“I prefer to be alone,” Bo finally said. Acamas stepped onto his lap. She lay down, resting her head in the crook of his arm. He smiled softly, doing his best to move his arm just a little less than before.

Jacob reached over and scratched Acamas’s head. She purred, the sound vibrating against Bo’s arm. “Well, at least you’ve got a cat. She’s nice.”

“She broke into my home back in California,” Bo said. “She climbed up onto a shelf on my porch and turned the doorknob enough to get inside. I pick locks, she opens doors. I’d say we were a pretty good match.” Acamas rolled onto her back, batting lightly at the necklace charm hanging from Bo’s neck. Because she kept her claws retracted, Bo did nothing to stop her. It wasn’t like those soft little mittens were going to do any harm.

“Even your cat’s a genius,” Jacob said.

Bo chuckled. He leaned back against the couch, resting his free hand on Acamas’s stomach. “There. I’ve got it running through the system. It’ll take a while, as I didn’t change her actual facial structure or nose much.”

Jacob nodded, pushing himself to his feet. “Call me if it gets anything before work tomorrow. Otherwise, I’ll see you in the morning.” He smiled. “Thank you for supper, Bo. And for helping Katie. Math is very much not my strong suit.”

Bo offered a smile. “You’re welcome, Jake. I’ll see you in the morning.”


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Surgeon – Chapter Twenty-Six

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Chapter Twenty-Six

12:45 PM; CLINSTONE, THE JOHNSON HOUSEHOLD, LIVING ROOM

“Whatcha thinking?” Jacob asked, tilting his head to the side.

“That the younger guy killed one girl this morning, and the older guy killed two people an hour ago,” he said. “Besides that, I’m still working out how this went.”

“We don’t have to know exactly how it happened. We never really do unless there’s footage, you know? I just have to know how they died and when they died.”

“I know that. But… I have to know how it happened. It’ll drive me insane otherwise,” Bo said. “Okay, Surgeon peeks in through the living room window, sees that Marion and Mike are asleep in their chairs, an old movie playing on TV. He comes in through the patio door, sneaks up behind Mike, Hypodermic to the neck. Mike wakes up and shoves Surgeon back before he can press the plunger down.”

“So… Mike wasn’t injected with etorphine on the first try?” Jacob asked.

Bo shook his head. “No, there’s more than one puncture mark on his neck,” he said, touching all three marks on Mike’s neck with his gloved fingers. “Mike stands up with enough force to knock his chair over,” Bo said, nudging the arm chair with the toe of his shoe. “The commotion wakes Marion up, and she runs out of the room. Mike and Surgeon fight and Surgeon goes through the glass coffee table. Mike doesn’t have the wounds to have been the one to go through it. Just like his fingerprint, his blood’s not in the system. Mike’s winded, so Surgeon gets him in the neck again. Mike fights him off and runs into the kitchen to retrieve a knife.

“Surgeon follows him—he’s bleeding, as you can see,” Bo said, tracing an invisible line over the blood drops on the carpeted floor. “Mike has a knife by the time Surgeon gets in here,” he said, stepping into the kitchen. Jacob followed, gaze focused on the blood trail as he stepped over it. “Mike gets one good swipe in on Surgeon before the etorphine is successfully injected into his neck. Adrenaline keeps him from going down right away. Surgeon grabs the knife and drives it into Mike’s abdomen. Mike hits the ground, back against the counter, and bleeds out in three or four minutes.

“Surgeon walks down the hall and finds Marion in the closet.” Bo stepped into the bedroom, peered into the closet. By all the clothes and hangers she’s pulled down in here, she grabbed ahold of everything and anything she could to try and keep him from pulling her out. He chloroforms Marion near the closet and carries her back to the bed. He draws her blood, inner arm. I’ll find out how many pints back in the morgue. He injects her with etorphine and removes a two inch square above her lip and onto her cheek.”

He tossed an open wallet to Jacob. “It’s a beauty mark. That’s what he removed. Natalie Lambert, whoever Surgeon wants her to be, is supposed to have a beauty mark.”

“Your ability to walk through a scene like that amazes me every single time,” Jacob said.

“It’s not me. It’s the blood. You just… You have to let the blood talk to you, and if you do that, you can piece together anything,” he said softly.

2:05 PM; CLINSTONE POLICE DEPARTMENT, MORGUE

“Mike Johnson. Seventh found victim. Time of death, around eleven o’clock this morning. Drugged with etorphine, killed by blood loss. Abdominal wound caused by a fully serrated, four and three-quarter inch full tang point steak knife,” Bo said. “Marion Johnson. Eighth found victim. Time of death, roughly eleven-forty AM. Chloroformed, two pints of O-negative blood taken, drugged with etorphine. Beauty mark above lip removed with a number ten scalpel.”

Jacob nodded. “Breasts, brows, beauty mark…” With the items ticked off on his first three fingers, he raised an eyebrow in Bo’s direction. “What’s left?”

Bo leaned back against the counter, crossing his arms over his chest. “Lips, ears, nose,” he said. “Unless Natalie’s nose needed to be substantiously larger than it is, I imagine he surgically ‘fixed’ her nose. If it needed to be smaller or straighter or more angular, it would’ve been easier to do by chiseling and carving rather than… slicing and dicing and implanting,” he said quietly. “Cleo Marshall, however, has a very dainty nose, and I guarantee you that in the next few days, someone is going to lose a nose to replace Cleo’s current one.”

“Ah… lovely,” Jacob said quietly.

“Right.” Bo cleared his throat. “Do you think you could get me the nine-one-one call for the Johnson scene?”

“You betcha. Can I ask why?” Jacob asked.

“I checked the Johnson’s home phone for prints, just to see, and… I found nothing. It had been wiped clean. Your average person isn’t going to wipe down their phone, especially the part that doesn’t touch their face.” The corner of Bo’s mouth scrunched up. “I think the Surgeon called it in, and if I can just hear his voice…”

“You want to memorize it,” Jacob said.

“Yes.”

“Yeah, kid, I’ll get it for you.”

Bo had given up on reminding Jacob he was not the young college student he appeared to be. Instead, he took the compliment. He didn’t get many that weren’t about his brain, anyway. “Thank you.”

“No problem.” Jacob cleared his throat. “You want a coffee refill?”

Bo shook his head. “I don’t drink coffee after noon.”

“All righty. I’ll go talk to dispatch. Be back in a few.”

2:57 PM; CLINSTONE, ROSE ANDERSON’S APARTMENT, BEDROOM

“Rose Anderson, twenty-one years old,” Bo said quietly, snapping a picture of the side of Rose’s head. “Ears removed, couple extra centimeters of skin removed around the base of each ear.” Pressing a knee to the side of the mattress, he leaned across Rose’s body to get a picture of the other side of her head.

“So… the next victim will be missing her lips?” Jacob asked.

“That would be my assumption.” Bo dropped his foot back the ground, wrapping a hand around the lens of his camera as he looked around the room. “He was able to sneak up on her without any troubles. There are no signs of struggle.”

“And ‘he’ would be the younger one in this case?” Jacob asked.

“Correct.” Bo picked up the cell phone on the nightstand, dropping his hand from his camera. It thudded dully against his chest before settling in its place. He pressed the home button and tilted it down until the light in the room reflected on the screen.

“Whatcha doing?”

“Cracking her passcode. One. Four. Six. Zero,” he said quietly. He tilted the phone back toward himself, using his thumb to try the first combination. One-zero-four-six. The screen unlocked and took him to the home screen, a picture of Rose and a boy, presumably her boyfriend.

One try?” Jacob asked. “Are you fucking kidding me?”

Bo snorted. “Practice, Jake. Lots of practice.” And a hell of a lot of luck, but for theatrics, Bo chose to keep that one to himself. He opened up her phone application and scrolled over to the recent calls section. “Nine-one-one was the last number she called, and I guarantee you that she wasn’t the one that called it in.”

“Which means we might just have both of their voices on record,” Jacob said.

Bo cracked an extremely faint smile. “Bingo.”


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Surgeon – Chapter Twenty-Five

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Chapter Twenty-Five

Wednesday: January 15, 2020

3:00 AM; CLINSTONE UNIVERSITY, DORM ROOM 202

Bo squatted down beside the twin bed in the dorm, tilting his camera for a better picture of the victim’s face. In the hall, he heard the victim’s roommate let out a quiet sob.

“It’s okay, Miss Roth. Take your time,” Jacob said softly.

“My classes don’t start until noon today, so I was out late,” Helen Roth said.

“Were you drinking?”

“Umm…”

“I’m not here to arrest you, Miss Roth.”

“Yeah, I was… Yes,” Helen whispered.

“And your roommate, did she go out?” Jacob asked.

“No. She stayed in. Homework. She was getting ready for bed when I left around ten.”

Bo frowned, snapping another quick picture of the victim’s face. Paula Gold, eighteen years old, O-negative blood type, eyebrows and nearly a square inch of skin around each brow removed. Number ten surgical knife. Bo rose to his feet, leaning over to snap a picture of the puncture mark on Paula’s inner arm. Sixteen gauge needle. Bo assumed two pints of blood had been removed, like usual. He’d confirm to the best of his ability with the autopsy.

Leaning down, Bo took a picture of the mark on Paula’s neck. Twenty-six gauge Hypodermic needle. Half inch long. Etorphine.

The hand on his shoulder caused him to stiffen as he slowly straightened himself back out. He turned around, coming face to face with Carter. Bo frowned, wrapping a hand around the lens of his camera before pressing it against his chest. “I wasn’t aware Jake had called you.”

“Oh, he’s ‘Jake’ now?” Carter asked.

Bo lifted a shoulder. “He asked me to call him Jake, so I did.”

“Ah.”

Bo cleared his throat, shoving his free hand into his pocket. Why do normal people stand like this again? It’s uncomfortable as Hell. Did Jake call you?”

“Hell no. I heard it on the scanner.”

“And… do you enjoy obeying orders from your partner? From your boss?” Bo asked.

“What’s it to you?”

“It’s nothing to me. I’m just curious.”

“Curious, my ass. You just like to be in everyone’s business. You’re a nosey little gossip.”

Bo offered a smile. “Detective Lehmann, in case you need a refresher, you and Miss Tanner are the ones who read through my notebooks in order to be in my business and gossip about me and the inner workings of my brain, not the other way around. If anyone is doing any snooping within another person’s business, I assure you it isn’t me.”

“Lehmann, I don’t believe you were signed off to enter this crime scene,” Jacob said as he stepped into the dorm.

“Legally, your presence here without being signed in does make you an official suspect,” Bo said.

“Oh, shut up, Austen. Jesus.”

“Oh, shut up, Lehmann,” Jacob mocked, tucking his notepad into the pocket of his suit jacket. “Protocol says Bo’s right. Get your ass out of here. It’s my case, and your presence is contaminating it.”

“Hanging around this kid has turned you into a real ass,” Carter said.

“Only two years younger than you, Detective Lehmann,” Bo said, though he knew it was pointless.

“And if you think I have turned into an ass, you need to look in a mirror, Lehmann,” Jacob said. “If anyone in this whole situation has turned me crueler, it’s you, not Bo. So get outta here so he can work.”

After Caleb left, Bo cleared his throat. “Thank you,” he said quietly.

Jacob flashed his usual charming smile. Even at three in the morning, it easily brightened his whole face. “You betcha. So, walk me through, Mister Austen. You’re the genius.”

5:30 AM; CLINSTONE POLICE DEPARTMENT, MORGUE

Jacob crossed the room, setting a cup of coffee in front of Bo. “Here. Thought you could use a refill.”

Bo smiled. “Thank you, Jake.” He cleared his throat, pulling off his gloves and tossing them into the trash. He washed his hands before sitting down in his usual chair, pulling the cup closer to himself. With a short sigh, he took a sip. He yawned, holding the back of his hand to his mouth.

“Am I boring you, Mister Austen?” Jake asked.

Bo laughed. “No.” He shook his head. “They took three pints from, umm….”

“Paula.”

“Yeah. Paula,” Bo repeated. “She’s Natalie’s blood type, so I don’t have a reasoning for the extra blood. She could’ve lost more blood than anticipated the first time around, or…” He shook his head, fighting back another yawn. “Or they’re planning on doing the rest of the surgeries in one go so they don’t have to keep waiting to have her ‘fixed’.”

Jacob’s brow furrowed. “You okay, Bo?”

Bo nodded. “Just tired. Haven’t been sleeping much.” He chuckled. “I think I was getting more sleep than this when I was trying to track down Kathy and Dallas.”

“Maybe you should go home and get some sleep before our shift actually starts,” Jacob said.

Bo waved a hand. “I’m good. Besides, I’ve got a bad feeling about today. If you want my honest assumption, this isn’t going to be the only dead girl we find before midnight.”

12:15 PM; CLINSTONE CEMETERY

Bo squatted down beside Tess Brown’s headstone, laying a bouquet of flowers on her grave. “I hope you like the headstone I picked out for you. I made sure it matched the ones on your parents’ graves. I had them bury you next to your mother. From what I’ve seen and heard, you were… close with her,” he said softly.

He hadn’t wanted her to sit in the morgue, hadn’t wanted her to go unclaimed. Tess Brown deserved more than to be cremated in a few weeks, thrown in with all the other unclaimed ashes, and tossed into the river or an ocean at the end of the year. Hell, she deserved to still be alive, but he couldn’t change that. The only thing he had been able to change was how they honored her death.

So he had filled out the paperwork yesterday to claim the body, and they had buried her that morning without a funeral service.

“I put flowers on some other graves too. It, uh, it was in your honor. Your mother, father, and your boyfriend. If there is an afterlife, Miss Brown, I hope you find them all, now that you’ve been laid to rest.” He frowned as his phone buzzed in his pocket. “I’m so sorry, Miss Brown. This is very rude of me,” he said, pulling his phone from his back pocket. “Work always calls when I’m trying to be respectful,” he murmured.

He rose to his feet and walked away from the grave before finally answering his phone. “Austen.”

“Hey. Where are you?” Jacob asked. “I went down to the lab, and you weren’t there.”

“Lunchbreak,” Bo said.

“You went out for lunch?”

Bo looked back at Tess Brown’s headstone. “More or less. What’s up?”

“New scene,” Jacob said. “Marion and Mike Johnson.”

“Marion? That name hasn’t even been on the US charts since the 1980s. How old was she? Late thirties, early forties?” Bo asked.

“Thirty-nine. Mike, the husband, was forty,” Jacob said quietly. “Sorry, do you just keep name facts on the ready for when someone dies?” 

“I mean, umm… depends on the name?”

“I doubt that.”

Jacob was right. It very much did not depend on the name. The name Marion had peaked in the 1910s. Two thousand one hundred and eighty-seven babies named Marion per every one million babies. Mike peaked in the 1960s. Jacob peaked in the 1990s.

Why are you still pretending you’re not you around him? You are full of useless information, and he doesn’t have a problem with it! Stop lying to the only guy who’s on your side.

Bo cleared his throat. “I’ll meet you at the station in a few. I just have to finish something real quick, okay?”

“Sure, Bo. I’ll text you the address. See you in a few.”


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Surgeon – Chapter Twenty-Four

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Chapter Twenty-Four

Tuesday: January 14, 2020

7:00 AM; CLINSTONE POLICE DEPARTMENT, MORGUE

“Hey,” Jacob greeted as he stepped into the morgue.

“Hi.” Bo raised an eyebrow. “Have you brought breakfast into my morgue?”

Jacob smiled. “You eat breakfast all alone down here every single day at seven.” He crossed the room and slid into the chair beside Bo. “Thought I’d join you.”

Bo chuckled. “Thanks, Jake. You don’t have to be here, though. I’m okay.”

“Oh, I know I don’t have to be. But I want to be. ‘Cause we’re friends, and friends like to eat breakfast together.”

Bo smiled faintly. “Again… thank you.”

“You betcha.”

“This doesn’t change the fact that I’m going back home after this case is over,” Bo said.

“Hey, that’s fine. You do what you have to do, Bo. I’m not a dictator.”

“I know.” Bo cleared his throat, wrapping a hand around his coffee mug. “So, uh… I took your advice of standing with my hands in my pockets.” He shook his head. “That feels unnatural.”

“Anything you’re not used to doing is unnatural,” Jacob said. “For what it’s worth, you shouldn’t have to change yourself in the first place. I only told you that because you asked me to be completely truthful, and I didn’t want you to be mad at me for telling you not to change who you are or how you are.”

“I know. That’s why I asked you. Because you’d tell me what I wanted to hear, regardless of how you felt about the situation.”

Jacob shook his head. “One of these days, Bo, I hope someone knocks some sense into you and tells you that no one can be normal.”

“I would say… good luck with that.”

“I know, unfortunately.” Jacob cleared his throat. “So, umm, once you go back to California… If anything bad happens, will you call me again?” Jacob asked.

“Do you want me to?”

“I’d prefer it, truthfully.”

“I will… do my best to call you if something goes south.”

Jacob breathed an audible sigh of relief. “Thanks, Bo.”

“You betcha,” Bo whispered.

12:00 PM; MINNESOTA, THE SURGEON’S HOUSE, OFFICE

“Did you take her food down?” he asked.

Gordon nodded. “Yeah, Dad, and I made sure she ate it.”

“Good. She needs her strength.” He cleared his throat. “She’ll eat again at six tonight, and her surgery will begin tomorrow morning at six, if that works for your schedule.”

Gordon glanced up at the ceiling for a moment. He looked back at his father, nodding. “As far as I know, that fits. If something comes up, I’ll tell you.”

“Good.” He shifted in his chair. “You’re going to want to go out for at least one or two before the surgery. There are four that need to be retrieved tomorrow.”

“Which ones?” Gordon asked.

“Paula, Rose, Marion, and Hannah. I’ll grab Marion in the evening, but the other three are younger than I am comfortable with.”

Gordon nodded. “Sure, Dad. Do you need any more etorphine?”

“Not today. I still have a dose or two here. I’ll let you know.”

Again, Gordon nodded. “All right. Well, I gotta get home. The kids are getting out of school soon due to snow, so I have to pick them up. I’ll be back tonight.”

He smiled softly. “Sure, Gordon. Tell them Grandpa loves them.”

Gordon chuckled, offered a smile of his own. “You could come by, tell them yourself.”

“Oh, I can’t. Not until your mom and sister are back. And then… then we’ll all be together again, and then I’ll come by. Okay?”

“Yeah. Sure, Dad.”

11:40 PM; CLINSTONE, BO AUSTEN’S HOUSE, BEDROOM

The usual jolt that awoke Bo from his nightmares was softened by the gentle tickle of Acamas’s whiskers on his cheek. “What’re you doing, Acky?” he asked roughly, cracking open one blue eye to look at his cat. She stood on his chest, her nose pressed against the end of his own, her eye locked on his. She purred, arching her back in a stretch. She lay down on his chest, stretching her paws out against Bo’s throat. Bo chuckled, lifting a hand to scratch the cat’s head.

He closed his eyes and shifted to run his hand over the cat’s spine instead. Bo may have had a less than ‘excellent’ life, more or less, but in more ways than one, Acamas was like a bright light at the end of the tunnel. And even though this house wasn’t home, Acamas was, and that made Clinstone, Minnesota just a little more tolerable.


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Surgeon – Chapter Twenty-Three

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Chapter Twenty-Three

Monday: January 13, 2020

8:00 AM; CLINSTONE POLICE DEPARTMENT, MAIN FLOOR

“Hey, Bo?” Jacob asked, standing up from his desk as Bo walked into his sight. Bo turned slightly, gaze focusing on Jacob. “Come here. Please?” Bo crossed the room, stopping a foot in front of Jacob’s desk, hands locked behind his back. “How are you doing?”

“I’m…” Bo trailed off, his mind searching for a word that wouldn’t make the detective worried. He wasn’t sure there was an excellent choice. “Recovering. I’m recovering, Jake. Thank you. H–how are you?”

Jacob smiled softly. “I’m good. Thanks. Did you sleep last night?”

“For a little while.”

“Do you have nightmares?” Jacob asked. “I don’t mean to pry or anything, but you startled yourself awake a few times the other night.”

“If you’d like to call them that,” Bo said softly.

“They’re about Kathy, aren’t they?” Jacob asked, his voice quiet. “About her and Dallas?”

Bo’s smile was faint. “Yes, mostly. But I’m good. Stable. I’ll be fine.”

“I’ll take your word for it,” Jacob said. Bo nodded once, clearing his throat. “Oh, you, umm… You’re dismissed.”

“Thank you. I’ll be in the morgue for the start of the day. Filling out some paperwork.”

“For what?” Jacob asked.

Bo lifted his shoulders. “Just something nice I want to do, that’s all.”

Jacob smiled. “All right, Austen. Don’t have too much fun.”

“I’ll do my best, Jake.”

5:00 PM; CLINSTONE POLICE DEPARTMENT, LAB

“What do you think it means? That there was nothing today,” Jacob said, arms crossed over his chest. 

“I’m… not sure,” Bo said as he shrugged on his coat. “Let’s say he’s performed surgery on both victims: Natalie Lambert and Cleo Marshall. He doesn’t want them in too much pain, so he’s giving them time to rest. In general terms, after a mastectomy—double breast removal, typically because of cancer—the patient is in ICU and the hospital for three to four days, I do believe. He’s probably giving them three to four days to rest between surgeries. 

“If he’s reconstructing their faces too, he’ll do that before we see any more victims killed for spare parts,” Bo said. “Natalie’s second surgical endeavor was probably two nights ago, maybe last night. I’m leaning more toward Sunday night. Four days of healing, less pain by that point, and he does not want to hurt them. I’d say Cleo Marshall’s second surgery will happen sometime around this Wednesday, Thursday, or Friday. After that, we’ll probably see another O-negative blood type victim missing something around Wednesday or Thursday morning.”

“You know, it’s totally going to blow my mind if you got any of those days correct,” Jacob said.

Bo smiled faintly as he lifted his satchel over his head, tugging on the strap to get it to rest evenly over his shoulder. “It’s all about patterns, Jake. Once you find one, you kind of just have to… roll with it. I try not to assume they’ll be absolutely and completely correct or adhered to, but the chances that they’ll follow somewhere along the line are pretty high.” He tilted his head to the side. “May I ask you something?”

“You betcha.”

“Let’s say I want to pretend I’m normal. Let’s say my abnormalities around Kathy and Dallas are the center of many of my nightmares. I can’t shut off my brain. There’s no changing that. Outwardly, though, I can change. Tips?” Bo asked.

“That’s… not what I was expecting,” Jacob said.

“I only ask in the assumption we’re friends. And I want you to be as honest as you can. You don’t have to worry about hurting my feelings, I assure you.”

Jacob cleared his throat. “You know how you stand with your hands behind your back?”

“Yes?”

“It comes off as… unnatural,” Jacob said. “Tuck them into your pockets when you’re standing. Like, the pockets on your pants. That, or cross your arms over your chest. That’s how a lot of people stand.”

Noted. Thank you, Jake. The advice is appreciated.”

“No problem,” Jacob said quietly.

“Well, I’ll be heading to my house, now,” Bo said. It wasn’t lost on Jacob that Bo refused to refer to it as ‘home’. “Enjoy your family tonight, Jake. You have a beautiful setup in that home of yours.”

Jacob grinned. “Thanks, Bo.”

Bo nodded. “See you tomorrow morning, Jake.”

“You betcha. Goodnight,” Jacob said as Bo walked past him.

Without turning around, Bo lifted a hand in departure. “Night, Jake.”

7:00 PM; BO AUSTEN’S HOUSE, DINING ROOM

Bo set a bowl of food on the floor for Acamas, a little smile tugging at either corner of his mouth as he scritched the top of her head. She purred and loved up against his shin before settling in for her supper. Bo headed back into the kitchen for his own supper, stilling when his phone rang on the counter. He leaned over to look at the screen, heart skipping a beat. Dallas. Bo couldn’t remember the last time Dallas had tried to call him. A month or two after the trial? Jamal had told Bo that a stipulation of getting his job back at the station was discontinuing his visits and phone calls to Dallas. Eventually, Dallas had apparently gotten the message and stopped calling.

Until now.

Well, he didn’t work at the LAPD anymore, and Jamal didn’t have control over his job at the CPD. So… surely he could accept the call. It was likely about Kathy anyway, but it would still be nice to hear Dallas’s voice, even if it was just to talk about Kathy.

Bo pulled his phone off the charger, accepted the call, and pressed his phone to his ear. “Hello?”

“Hey, shorty. I wasn’t sure you were going to answer.”

“I… needed to weigh my options first.”

“Of course,” Dallas said, his voice soft and understanding, like Bo always remembered it to be. “You won’t believe this, but Jamal was sitting in my cell when I got off work today. Just sitting there.”

“What did he want?”

“He wanted me to call you. He said he came by to tell you about Regina and Kathy. I, uh, also heard you’re out in Minnesota now?”

“I am,” Bo said after a moment. “He asked you call me?”

“Told me to, actually. Ordered.” Dallas chuckled, but it didn’t quite sound like Dallas. “He says you’re not doing well, Bo. How are you doing?”

“I’m fine. You don’t need to worry about me, Dallas.”

“That’s definitely not what Jamal said. The man wouldn’t come to prison to visit me if it weren’t serious, Bo. He fuckin’ hates my guts. For him to worry about you and talk to me? Bo, he’s gotta think you’re half a step over the edge.”

Bo leaned back against the counter, crossing his free arm over his chest. “Jamal doesn’t know me as well as he thinks he does. I’m fine.”

“It’s me, Bo. Behind bars or not, I’m still me. I care about you, and I’m always gonna worry about you. Just tell me what’s going on.”

Bo closed his eyes. “You’re allowed fifteen-minute phone calls. Fifteen minutes is not nearly enough time to dive into the depths of my depression, Dallas, even if I wanted to. But truly, I’m… safe. I’m working a case, and I have a commitment to the victims of it.”

“Can you make a commitment to me too? That… that after this case is over, you come back to Los Angeles and visit me here at the prison for a face-to-face talk?”

“Yes,” Bo said after a long silence. “I can… I’ll commit to that.”

“Good. I’m holding you to that, Bo. I’ll see you after the case is over. Okay?”

“Okay.”

A little over a thousand, three hundred miles away in Los Angeles, Dallas put the phone back on the hook and turned in his chair to face Jamal. He was leaned back against the wall, arms crossed over his chest. “He’s not well,” Dallas said after a moment.

“No shit.”

Dallas ran both hands over his short hair, fingers locked together. “You need to leave him alone, Jamal. You aren’t helping him.”

“Do you really think I flew all the way to Clinstone because I thought my presence would drastically increase the value he sees in his own life?”

“God, Jamal, I wish like hell I knew what you thought about anything.” Dallas dropped his hands back to his lap. “He’s… okay until the end of this case. He follows through on commitments and promises, and he has a commitment to this case and to visiting me afterward. He won’t put a stop to either of those things.”

“And afterward, then what? I hire someone to kill someone in Clinstone to give him another damn case to investigate? I can do a lot of things, but supplying Clinstone with a consistent stream of homicides to keep him too occupied to end his life isn’t one of them.”

“First of all, it is one of them. You aren’t exactly above murder. Or torture.”

Jamal rolled his eyes, but he didn’t respond.

“Second of all, I… I don’t know, Jamal. I wish I knew what the right answer was, but I don’t.”

Jamal let out a slow breath, and for the briefest of moments, the hard mask he wore over his face fell. He looked like hell. Tired and worn down and worried. But the mask was back up so quickly that Dallas may have imagined it just to see the humanity buried so deeply inside the man he had once seen as a father. “I considered putting one of my men on him. A bodyguard in the shadows type of thing. But I… I don’t know. It’s like hiring a spy, and I don’t assign spies to people I…” He ran his tongue over his top row of teeth. “To people like Bo. People that aren’t marks or targets or rats. Civilians. I don’t assign spies to civilians.”

Dallas pushed himself to his feet. “For what it’s worth, it’s not spying if the spy doesn’t tell you everything Bo does and says. Then it’s just a… guardian angel that works on cash instead of prayers. Yeah?”

“Yeah,” Jamal whispered. Once Dallas had made it to the doorway, Jamal cleared his throat. “Thank you, Silver.”

“Yeah.” Dallas tapped his hand on the doorframe. “If I’m ever a free man again, I want Bo to be the one who picks me up the day I’m released. So your spy that’s not a spy? Benefits everyone.”


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Surgeon – Chapter Twenty-Two

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Chapter Twenty-Two

4:25 AM; CLINSTONE, THE MASON HOUSEHOLD, GUEST BEDROOM

Bo startled himself awake, the bed shaking beneath him as he fully came to. He blinked a few times, gaze slowly scanning over the wall in front of him. A night light cast a soft glow across the photos hanging in the room. Jacob and Alice’s presence in at least a few of them gave him a pretty good clue where he was.

“You okay?”

Bo flinched before freezing for a moment. The voice was Jacob’s. Bo hadn’t exactly determined if that was cause for further alarm or not. He looked back over his shoulder, finding Jacob lying on the other side of the bed, his eyes still closed. “What are you doing in here?”

“Makin’ sure you’re okay.” Jacob cleared his throat. “I’ve been where your head’s at. Better not to be left alone with it. Especially at night in the dark.”

Well, that much was certainly true. Being left alone with his thoughts the majority of every day and every night hadn’t exactly served Bo well in life. “Thank you.”

“You betcha.”

“You were in my headspace after your mom died, if I… remember correctly?”

“You do. And yeah, after my mom died. I woke every day hoping the day before had been a dream and she’d be alive, and when she wasn’t, I spent the rest of the day hoping I’d die by the end of it. It’s a horrible place to be, and I don’t wish on anybody, but if somebody I know is in it, I’m going to do what I can to help them through it. Maybe even out of it.”

“I… appreciate that. And you. Thank you.”

“You betcha,” Jacob repeated. He gave Bo’s shoulder a firm squeeze. “Get some shut-eye. I’ll try to chase off whatever dreams are bothering you.”

11:00 AM; CLINSTONE, THE MASON HOUSEHOLD, KITCHEN

Jacob looked over his shoulder at Bo as the blonde walked into the kitchen, arms delicately wrapped around himself. Jacob smiled. “Good morning,” he greeted.

Bo nodded, looking a little… far away. “I’m sorry about last night. It wasn’t William’s or your responsibility to shoulder my problems.”

“You didn’t hurt anyone by telling someone you were hurting. And you don’t have to apologize for being on the edge or being depressed. You’ve been through a lot, and our coworkers aren’t helping to make that any better.” He offered a soft, reassuring smile. “I’m just you told Will, that he told me. I’m glad you changed your mind.”

Bo nodded slightly. “Well… thank you. I’ve not had much experience with the… lack of judgment for it.”

“The only person in this entire house that will judge you, is you.” A pause. “So, you want chocolate chips in your pancakes?”

“Hmm?”

“I’m making breakfast.”

Bo glanced at the clock above the stove. “Isn’t it brunch?”

Jacob chuckled. “You know, that’s exactly what Alice asked me the first time she came over for breakfast,” he said, shaking his head. “It’s breakfast because I’ve only been awake for, like, twenty minutes.”

Bo’s gaze shifted to the floor. “I–I think chocolate chips could work.”

Jacob smiled. “Good. You can sit down, if you’d like.” When Bo didn’t move, Jacob reached out and pulled out the chair closest to him. “Here.”

“Thanks,” Bo said quietly as he lowered himself into the chair.

“No problem.” Jacob eye-balled about a cup worth of chocolate chips into the bowl of pancake batter. “Do you think that sleeping in the same bed last night makes us friends?”

“I… Yes, probably. I suppose so.”

“So… you can call me Jake?”

Bo let out a breath that sounded like an airy laugh. “Sure, Jake.”

“Hot damn—dog. Hot dog,” Jacob said.

“Real nice save, Jay,” Alice said as she walked into the kitchen, Elijah cradled in one arm. She crossed the room and leaned up to kiss his cheek. 

Jacob turned his head, meeting her lips instead. A smile turned up either corner of his mouth as he ran a hand over Elijah’s head. “Charlotte still sleeping?”

“Yeah, she gets the late mornings from you,” Alice said.

Jacob scoffed. “Wounded.”

She rolled her eyes and turned to face Bo. “Good morning, Bo.”

“Good morning, Miss Tangwerai.”

“You can call me Alice, if you’d like,” she said. Bo nodded. “You’re sticking around for breakfast, then?” Again, Bo nodded. “Good. We’re glad to have you.” As she walked past him, she brushed his hair away from his forehead. Bo closed his eyes, a faint smile forming on his face. It had been a long time since he had been cared for, and until now, he hadn’t been aware that he had missed that feeling.

As soon as this case was over, he knew he had to visit his mother and father. That visit was long overdue.

12:00 PM; MINNESOTA, THE SURGEON’S HOUSE, OFFICE

“Brooke has healed up quite nicely,” he said.

Gordon nodded. “There shouldn’t even be much of a scar.”

“Right.” He cleared his throat, shifting in his desk chair. “I’m going to reshape her face today.”

“And then what?” Gordon questioned.

“While Brooke heals, I’ll reshape your mother’s face, and we’ll move on from there. Three to four days of healing time between each surgery, give them some time to recuperate in between.”

Gordon nodded. “Yeah, Dad. Sounds good. Do we have all of the… parts found?”

“Found but not yet taken, yes. We’ll wait until we’re close to the next surgery.” He steepled his fingers beneath his chin. “I’ll be slimming Brooke’s nose down tonight, as well. It needs to be straighter. After she’s healed from that, we’ll see where we’re at with appearances and lay out the rest of the plan.”

Again, Gordon nodded. “Sure, Dad.” He pushed himself out of his chair. “I have to get to work. I’ll see you tonight for Brooke.”

He nodded once. “See you then, son.”


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Surgeon – Chapter Twenty-One

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Chapter Twenty-One

Sunday: January 12, 2020

2:00 AM; CLINSTONE, IVORY HILL, PARKING LOT

“Thanks for calling me about him instead of just sending him home in an Uber or something,” Jacob said, pointing his thumb back at his car.

William nodded. Arms crossed over his chest, he leaned to the side for a peek at Bo. He sat in the passenger seat of Jacob’s car, head tilted all the way back against the headrest. William cleared his throat, eyes coming back to Jacob’s face. “Umm, I wasn’t going to say anything, but I worry about what will happen if I don’t. If I understood him correctly, umm, he came here tonight with the intention of killing himself once he had enough alcohol in his system. I… I couldn’t send him home by himself knowing that. I couldn’t. I was going to take him back home with me and let him have the guest room, but I was worried he’d think I took advantage of him or something. And with him already in a dark state of mind, I didn’t want to risk that. So…” William shifted his weight between his feet, cleared his throat again. “Keep an eye on him tonight, yeah? Just to be safe.”

“Jesus,” Jacob whispered. “Yeah, I will. Thank you for telling me, Will. Seriously.” He pulled William into a quick hug, giving his back a few comfort taps on the back. “Thank you for saving him, even if you didn’t know that’s what you were doing at the time.”

“Yeah. I’m glad I could.” William patted Jacob’s back before stepping away. “If you need anything while he’s at the house, or if something happens and he needs somewhere else to go, let me know.”

“I will. Thanks, Will. Night, man.”

William nodded. “Night, Jake.”

Jacob passed a hand through his hair before letting out a breath. He’d known Clinstone had been rough on Bo, but he hadn’t expected to be picking him up from the bar that morning. Or to be told he wanted to die. He turned around and headed to the car. Inside, he cleared his throat as he clicked his seat belt into place. “So I was thinking you could sleep in my guest room tonight.”

“I couldn’t ask that of you,” Bo said.

“You’re not. I’m offering.”

“I don’t want to be a burden.”

“You won’t be. You aren’t.”

“Mm.” Head still leaned back, Bo turned toward Jacob. “William told you, I presume? It just sort of slipped out. I didn’t intend for him to know. I didn’t want to put that on his shoulders.”

“I’m worried about you, Bo.”

“Don’t be. I likely would’ve talked myself out of it. I don’t plan to leave this case open. I don’t want to leave behind any unfinished business.”

“You’re talking like you’re planning on ending your life the second this case is over.” Bo didn’t respond. “Are you?”

“You shouldn’t be worrying about it, Detective. You have bigger fish to fry. You have a fiancee and children to worry about. You don’t know me well enough to need to be worried about me and what I do or plan to do.”

“There isn’t a specific amount of things you have to know about a person before you can give a shit if they kill themselves or not. I’ve talked strangers off of roof tops and balconies. I’ve talked them into dropping the gun or the knife. As much as I’d like to get to know you, to be friends with you, I don’t need to in order to care if you’re in a dark place or not.”

Bo either needed a moment to sit with that or was planning to simply ignore Jacob until he moved past the subject. With Bo, it was hard to tell which. The young man’s face never offered up much emotion. The most obvious expression of his mood and his pain Jacob had been able to detect thus far was the snapping of the rubber band on his wrist at the police station, when Gwen and Carter had deep-dived into his notebooks.

It wasn’t until Jacob pulled out of the parking lot that Bo mustered up a quiet, “You do not want to befriend me, Detective.”

“What makes you think that? I mean, genuinely. Why?”

“I have friends in Los Angeles. Not many. But a few. I stopped talking to one almost entirely after Dallas was arrested. The other, I… only really spoke to because we still worked together and had to see each other every day. I pull into myself, Detective. I don’t… express. I don’t discuss. I don’t talk it out. I simply pull my limbs and head into my shell and refuse to come out, despite the phone calls and the texts and the phone calls and the emails and the random drop-bys at my house or my job. I pull into myself and away from everyone. Nobody… deserves that treatment from a ‘friend’. I am not a good friend. Or a good son. Or a good buddy. I am… I am not someone you want in your life, Detective. I am not.”

Jacob flexed his fingers on the steering wheel, clearing his throat. “After my mom died, I, uh, went through that phase too. I didn’t think anyone deserved to have to be friends with someone who was… broken. Therapy eventually taught me that I wasn’t broken. I was depressed. All of the good thoughts in my head were overshadowed by darkness and guilt and anger and grief, and they fundamentally changed who I was as a person. But I wasn’t broken. And I didn’t deserve to be treated like I was. I didn’t deserve to treat myself like I was broken or less-deserving than other people just because I was depressed.” He glanced over at Bo who, surprisingly, was looking right at him. “Everybody falls apart sometimes. And a lot of times, we need help putting the pieces back together. Sometimes the puzzle is really hard to put together because it didn’t come with a complete image on the box and the pieces are shaped weird and it doesn’t have a clear border and the manufacturer didn’t send all the pieces the first time. But eventually, you get the right pieces sent to you, and they send you an image of the completed puzzle, and you’re able to fit the damn thing back together. There’s no shame in having lost a few pieces or them being shaped different than standard puzzle pieces. It’ll go back together eventually, even if it needs a little glue and a few puzzle-building friends.”

Bo held onto the silence so long that Jacob had to check that he was awake and breathing more than once. “So you’re saying that you… want to be one of these puzzle-building friends?”

“If you’re ready to start picking up the pieces and figuring out where they go? Yes. And if you aren’t, I don’t have to be a friend. I can just help you find the lost pieces, figure out which ones need to be re-ordered.”

“Well,” Bo said after a moment, “I can certainly see why you and Mister Foreman are friends.”

“He’s a good guy. A really good guy. He didn’t want to tell me, didn’t want to spill your secret without permission. But he was scared something would happen to you if he didn’t.”

Bo nodded. “I understand the fear. I mean, I mostly understand it. I’m still having a hard time wrapping my head around the fact that there are two of you here in Clinstone who want to… talk to me. Befriend me. That usually doesn’t happen to me within the first, you know, twelve days of a new location.”

“I know you’ve met a lot of pieces of shit, and I totally believe that you’re well within your rights to feel jaded and untrusting of new people and their motives. But despite all that, we aren’t all assholes. Some of us just, you know, like having friends and meeting new people. And making new people feel like they belong, that they deserve to belong. Some of us… are just as weird as you.”

Bo snorted. “I’m not sure I believe that last part.”

“If you’re some sort of freak, those of us who want to be friends with you gotta be weird too. You can’t have it both ways, kid.”

“Kid,” Bo echoed. “You’re aware I’m not that much younger than you are, yes?”

“You’re giving me a lot of credit there. You look like a college student. I’m callin’ you kid.”

“You’re four years older than I am.”

“You… age well. Damn. Congrats, dude.”

Bo snorted again. Twice in one conversation. Jacob figured that was an accomplishment. “We’re in our thirties. Not our eighties.”

“We’re in our thirties working overnights and triple shifts and waking up at three AM to respond to homicides in the woods or the river. Most of us don’t age well, even in our thirties.”

“You’re aging just fine, Detective.”

“Aww, thanks.” Jacob glanced over at Bo as he rolled to a stop at a red light. “You’re staying at my house for the night. You aren’t asking it of me. You aren’t burdening me with it. I’m telling you it’s what’s happening. Okay?”

Bo nodded. “Okay.”


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Surgeon – Chapter Twenty

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Chapter Twenty

Saturday: January 11, 2020

6:00 AM; MINNESOTA, THE SURGEON’S HOUSE, BASEMENT

“You’re going into surgery this evening, darling, so you only get breakfast today. Eat up,” he said, sliding a plate of food beneath Cleo’s cell door.

Cleo grabbed his wrist, her eyes locking with his warm, blue gaze. “H–how’s Brooke?”

For a moment, his gaze shifted to her hand, an almost loving look masking his face. “She’s fine, darling,” he said softly. “Healing. She’ll be back in here soon.” He lifted his free hand, cupping her cheek. She closed her eyes in an attempt to avoid flinching away from his touch. “You’ll be going under around six tonight.”

“What kind of surgery?” she asked, her voice barely a whisper as she forced her eyes open.

“A breast augmentation.” He gently pried her fingers off his wrist and rose to his feet. “Eat, and then get some rest. I will see you tonight, Lauren.”

7:00 PM; CLINSTONE, IVORY HILL

“Mister… Austen, if I remember correctly?” the bartender asked.

Bo cleared his throat. “Yes. That would be me.”

William smiled. “Thought so. What’re you havin’? On me.”

Bo’s brow furrowed suspiciously. “Why?”

“Consider it a complimentary drink on behalf of Clinstone.”

“Yeah?” Bo asked. “Does every new Clinstone resident get a free drink?”

“Just the cute ones.”

Bo laughed. The genuine shock factor of the comment made it a little hard to hide the sound like he usually did. “In that case, I’ll take a beer.” He waved a hand in William’s direction as he lifted himself onto an empty bar stool. “Dealer’s choice.”

William smiled. “Comin’ right up.”

9:30 PM; CLINSTONE, IVORY HILL

Bo was three beers past his ‘Kathy drank all the time and look what happened to her’ no booze rule and feeling… okay. His world hadn’t ended any more than it had been, anyway. That had to count for something.

“Are you planning on driving tonight, Bo?”

He lifted his eyes to William’s face. “We’ll see. I’m planning on switching to Coke anyway. The drink. Pop. Not the drug. And… actually another beer too.”

William snorted. “I getcha. One beer and a Coke — the drink — comin’ up.”

Bo finished off the rest of his beer and pushed it toward William as he came back to the counter. “Thank you.”

“You’re welcome.” William crossed his arms over the bar. “Are you drinking away your demons or someone else’s?”

Bo raised a brow as he twisted off the cap on his pop bottle. “How would one drink away someone else’s demons?”

“You see other people’s demons at every crime scene you go to, and you’ve been… busy since you got here. I can’t imagine the shit you guys see, day in and day out. You’ve got a lot of demons in there that aren’t yours at all.”

“Ah.” Bo took a small sip of his pop. “The demons I work with are different than the ones I live with. I’m drinking for the ones I live with.”

“Things have been rough, huh?”

Bo couldn’t stop the slight narrow of his eyes. “Did Mason put you up to this?”

“Jake? No.” William uncrossed his arms long enough to flick Bo’s unopened beer bottle. “The therapy sessions come free with the booze.”

Bo snorted. “You must be quite bored.”

William shrugged one shoulder. “It’s a slow night. And you’re an interesting guy.”

“I’ll take your word for it.”

William simply watched him for a moment, his expression neither concerned nor humored. It was just… there. Neutral. Soft. Present in the moment, seemingly without judgment. Bo could see how easy it would be for a drunken patron to unload their problems on the bartender without much thought or worry.

“Where’d you come in from? Where were you before Clinstone?” William asked.

“Los Angeles.” Bo scratched the side of his head before finally cracking open his fourth beer and taking a sip. “I’ve spent the majority of my life there. After this case is over, I’m heading back.”

“Wishing for sun instead of snow?”

Bo lifted his shoulders. “I’m not actually from LA. I grew up with actual winters, and out of the two, I’d rather be cold than hot.”

“Mm.” William raised a brow. “Then what’s in LA that’s not here?”

Bo weighed his choices for a moment. As it stood, William seemed unaware of Hangman and Kathy Baker and everything else that weighed Bo down. If he could keep it that way, he would for as long as he could. “My adoptive parents, mostly. My old job is waiting for me when I return, and at the LAPD, I already know where I stand with my coworkers. I struggle a bit more with that here.”

“Someone’s treating you like shit because of Anderson, huh?” William asked. “I’m guessing Gwen.”

“She has a history of this?”

William titled his head to the left, to the right, considering. “She ran the first replacement chief outta town pretty fast. She was engaged to Anderson when everything came to a head. It’s tough to recover from, living with a criminal.”

Bo couldn’t help but scoff. That piece of information, Jacob had left unsaid. Gwen and Bo were practically cut from the same cloth, yet she treated him like he was the killer instead of Dallas or Anderson. Like her, Bo was just… an oblivious bystander.

“Gwen lashes out at people who remind her of herself. I guess it’s hard not to, you know? It feels like being forced to watch history repeat itself.”

“Ah, so you do you know where I came from.”

William smiled. “A little. I didn’t want to force your past on you though.”

Bo chuckled softly, tilting his beer bottle back and forth between his hands. “It seems a bit like it follows me everywhere. Even when I try not to spring it on people, it seems to be sprung on me.”

“I’m sorry if it feels like I did that to you.”

Bo shook his head. “You didn’t. You… actually helped me understand Gwen a little better than any of the previous explanations and reasons I’ve been given. Thank you.”

“You’re welcome.”

Bo took a sip of his beer. “My old boss dropped in yesterday to tell me that Kathy Baker has cancer. I suppose that started the beginning of the… demons I’m trying to drink away.”

“I’m sorry to hear that. I’m sure you’ve got some mixed feelings about it.”

“That is… an understatement.” Bo chuckled, shaking his head. “I used to look up to Kathy until I actually met her. I thought she was this genius detective, this unstoppable force. But the majority of what she’s known for has nothing to do with her and everything to do with Jamal Pitman. The only thing I’ve heard about Kathy that’s true is that she’s a bitch with a hell of a cruel streak. The rest of her fame or whatever you want to call it is built entirely on Jamal’s shoulders. She just takes all the credit for it.”

“And you had to deal with her firsthand.”

“For a very, very long time.”

“Why did your old boss stop by to tell you?”

“He believed I would be deeply affected by it and wanted me to hear it by him, in person, instead of over the phone or on the news.” Bo took another sip of his beer, which was quickly becoming a loose-lips elixir. “When Kathy and Dallas — Hangman — fled California, Jamal put me at the head of the investigation. I struggled… a lot with that, and when we finally caught them, I refused to testify initially. He believed that was because I was close to Kathy or because I still idolized her in some form.”

“But it was because you were close to Dallas.”

Bo snorted. “I was in love with Dallas.”

“Ouch.”

Bo couldn’t help but laugh. “Yeah, that about sums it up. I followed him everywhere I could up until the day he ran away with Kathy. I’m still… so angry. I would’ve helped him if I’d known. There’s no way he wasn’t aware of that, and he still…”

“He chose being a fugitive over choosing to tell you.”

“Wow. The therapy really is free with the booze, huh?”

William smiled. “What can I say? I’ve been doin’ this a long time.”

“Yeah? Talking to depressed nerds over their secret crushes on serial killers?”

William glanced up at the ceiling, one eyebrow raised. “Admittedly, that’s a new one. But I’ve heard stranger, believe me.”

“Mm. I’ll try to take your word for it.” Bo took a long drink of his beer. “Are you gay, William?”

“Very.” Bo’s response came in the form of a chuckle. “Are you?”

Bo shook his head, lifting the beer back to his lips. “I don’t know what the hell I am,” he said into the bottle before taking another sip. “I like… Dallas. And a woman named Bridget. She was my closest friend before Dallas came along. After he ran away and was arrested and after the trial… I don’t know. I suppose I dropped off the deep end a little. I couldn’t even begin to count the texts and calls she’s sent, the voicemails she’s left. And my parents. And the detective I worked with after Dallas left. My old lab partner. I haven’t been a good friend. Or a good son. I wouldn’t make a good partner, either, no matter what I am or who I like.”

William set his elbows on the counter, hands folded beneath his chin. “If they thought you were some horrible person, they wouldn’t keep trying to check in on you. They know you aren’t doing well, and they want you to know that they care. That if you need them, they’re just a call or a text away. People who are annoyed by you or irritated by you don’t keep reaching out when they get ignored, unless it’s to be an asshole about the fact that you ignored them. But your family and friends? They love you. Even if you aren’t able to be the best friend in the world right now. It sounds like they’ll still be around when you’re ready to be.”

Bo watched William for an absurdly long amount of time. There was nothing in his eyes or on his face to indicate he was being a facetious asshole. His words didn’t seem misplaced or malicious. They seemed oddly genuine. “I truly appreciate that, William.” He shook his head, turning to look toward the woman singing quietly in the back corner of the bar. “I came here with an entirely different intention tonight. I was going to get drunk and… carry it out. But by some… miraculous William Foreman intervention, I do believe you’ve saved a life tonight.” He turned back to the bartender. “Thank you.”

Something had changed in William’s face, but Bo couldn’t quite pinpoint it. His brow seemed slightly more furrowed or drawn, but what that meant, Bo wasn’t sure. “You’re welcome,” William whispered. “I’m so glad I was able to intervene.”

Bo nodded, eyes falling back to his beer. “Me too.”


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